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Spring’s Thin Ice

Posted on April 30, 2019 by Leyda Bien

https://ragtagcommunity.wordpress.com/2019/04/29/rdp-monday-nimble/

Across old mind’s pond

Nimble words skate spring’s thin ice

Not quick enough, fall

Into chill waters, poems

A shiver of memories

©Leyda Bien, 2019 ~ All rights reserved.

Image: Pixabay.com

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6 thoughts on “Spring’s Thin Ice”

Michael B. Fishman on April 30, 2019 at 3:55 am said:

The older the pond the thinner that spring ice seems to be. I thought this was a nice poem.

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- Leyda Bien on April 30, 2019 at 6:37 am said:
  
  I’m so glad you “got it”–the older the pond, the thinner the ice, haha! Thank you so much for visiting, reading and your wonderful comment–you’ve truly made my day! 🙂 Blessings to you!
  
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sgeoil on April 30, 2019 at 5:01 am said:

I love this. Great metaphor.

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- Leyda Bien on April 30, 2019 at 6:35 am said:
  
  Thank you So Much!
  
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  - sgeoil on April 30, 2019 at 6:36 am said:
    
    My pleasure!
    
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    - Leyda Bien on April 30, 2019 at 6:40 am said:
      
      🙂
      
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